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Thats one blast of a dream you heard, A squirel chrismas party...!!! Who wouldn't want to see that again!!! You did great Job with your imagintion, I like that. However ...

Wow...!!! Kudos to you, I am still looking foward to a day when I'll be able to come up with such wonderful inspiration, its a great piece. However you spacing ...

Lovely piece you've got here, its nice I must acknowlegde, the feelings you put into the poem makes it feel as if its happening right now and I should take ...

the ANOTHER concept is beautiful and you did a good work putting it together but it would have been more interesting and have more mean if you had placed a ...

You sure know how to make your words and expression sound beautiful, its a great work you did here but it will be even greater if your words contain more ...

Hi Tarshni, that I must say is a great work and I love your use of expression and you deserve around of applause. But I will like to add that ...

I must say this is a very nice work, i have been out of the game for a while and I think what you did here got me a little ...

It takes courage to write a poem nd I see such courage been displayed in your work, its really a combination of beautiful expression. But still you could do more ...

Am amazed! If this is wat drowning experience is like then I'll never learn to swim. I love your use of words and your power of description, I felt as ...

Ehmmmm..... That was impressive I must say I enjoyed reading through the poem your use of description was quite good. But, there still much you can do with this idea ...

Below am going to rewrite the poem to help with the repition There's a fold in this paper, A crease, a line, A literal wrinkle in a moment in time. ...

Thats a lovely poem for a day like this. Stanza 3 line 2 should not start with "Is" its grammatically incorrect. Also in the poem you made use of both ...

I will leave the grammatical errors for some other time. But the concept of the poem was quit confusing, we know you are missing the summer which from the poem ...

Your poem is beautiful i loved it. What peanut said i think the capitalization is not necessary since capitalization is for the old format of poetry Though its still accepted, ...

Your poem was a beautiful one and i enjoyed it. One thing i observed was that there was too much "and" and "but" were they were not necessary try to ...